I really like what you did with this. The contrast between then and now, finding grace in it all.
As an audio-visual person, if I could offer one potential tweak, it'd be to change "intercom" to "sound system" or "speakers". Intercom took me out of it, because it's not what would be in an old church.
I really like what you did with this. The contrast between then and now, finding grace in it all.
As an audio-visual person, if I could offer one potential tweak, it'd be to change "intercom" to "sound system" or "speakers". Intercom took me out of it, because it's not what would be in an old church.
Good call - thanks!